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第234章 他有洪荒之力

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其实高方平倒是用了《西游记》蓝本,但严格来说西游记本身只是有意义,论故事其实不算多好看,并且前后逻辑不符,明代的小白文真是弱爆了,根本没有清晰的层次和武力体系,总体一团混乱,前面可以把天宫打的一地鸡毛,后面却连天宫的小童也打不过,却也没有一个合理的自圆其说的解释,真正的西游记差就差在这些地方。

不说文学性,只论情节和讲故事能力的话,后世起点网的番茄辰东可以吊打十个吴承恩,所以高方平就蓝本用的西游记,主题事件不变,却是“引用借鉴”了很多番茄辰东的手法设定以及讲故事的方式等等。

结果真把老张虎得一愣一愣的,竟是一看就是两个时辰舍不得放下,叫他吃火锅,他也不来。

晚间,张商英终于看完了,叹息一声道:“写的很好,你会赢得,但写的太简略,文辞功底差太多了。”

高方平道:“我本来写的就只是主线,润色填充,重新整理文巧辞句,这当然是商英相公您的任务,注意要点有几个,不能用文言文,不能被文青批评却又要让老百姓能理解,您的文辞功底炉火纯青,刻意为之您当然能做到。然后,设定和主线走向,风格,坚决不能改,否则就扑街。”

张商英点点头道:“做到这些当然很容易,只是你这篇一出,你这是把道士往死里打啊,打击道士无所谓,但会否有抬举佛家的嫌疑?老夫始终认为,宗教可以存在却不能去参与干涉!”

高方平道:“这是没办法的事,暂时来说敌人的敌人就是朋友,佛门被道士压得太过了些,我朝的道士也太牛了些,就算经历了张怀素事件还是牛,江南来的消息,朱勔等人勾结林灵素,大肆兴建神霄万寿宫,吸收大批信徒,声势之大骇人听闻,以至于种师道都坐不住,写了《东南策》就要闹事。”

张商英想了一下无奈的道:“行,也只有先这样了,秃驴要是做大,想来你个丧心病狂的小奸臣也会收拾他们的,有你在前面拉仇恨,老夫和皇帝无忧也。总归来说,这次你猪肉平用笔杆子解决问题,而不是带着永乐军去到处砍人,已经进步多了,这才叫文臣。以后你少耍些流氓。”

“叔叔威武八七。”高方平又拍了他一马屁。

张商英转而道:“然而,你打击道教的同时,添加了些摩尼教的黑料,又是什么鬼?还嫌不够乱吗?据老夫所知,摩尼教也勉强算是温和。”

高方平喃喃道:“温不温和两说,有机会我会专门研究一下摩尼教,然而不论如何,摩尼教在江南已经做大,种师道的东南策里有过论述,教众信徒二十万以上,不引人注意的地方就在于只集中在东南一代和道教斗法。若在别处还好,但东南如今民不聊生,被蔡党把持,此局面正是被宗教利用的土壤,因为老百姓一没饭吃就会想其他,就会被趁虚而入,所以小子断言,若不加以节制,不出十年江南必然出事。希望此番你我两个文字流氓,能通过故事,适当的提醒一些天下人,那么摩尼教的教众少一人,国朝就安稳一丝,若能维持住一个平衡点只要不乱,将来有天我会去东南教他们做人,切下这个毒瘤,则国朝的大病基本就去了。”

张商英奸笑道:“他们会被你影响的,因为他们会爱看你的故事的,老夫去润色了,再给你几天假,暂时别离开,随时听候老夫调遣,这次咱们要和那帮奸臣在文字战场上打一场硬战。”

……

“嗯……自此,那只天地所生的小猴子为了保护家园,为了猴宝宝们的安全,毅然踏上了简陋的竹筏漂洋过海,誓言不学得神通不回花果山。”

一个秀才拿着现有的《西游记》章节,在一个院子里给孩子们讲故事。

最后秀才摇头晃脑的补充道:“小猴子坐着简陋的竹筏,漂洋过海远走他乡之际仅一岁,等待他的是千山万水的阻隔以及九死一生,欲知后事如何,石猴能否活下来,请等下回分解。”

一群听得傻傻的小孩子们沸腾了,就没听过这么有趣的故事。纷纷跑过来揪着秀才的衣服不让离开,一跳一跳的喊道:“后来怎么样了?”

“我咋知道,今个没有了。”秀才摊手道。

于是小孩子们就自发的展开了讨论:

“石猴真厉害,不到一岁就那么聪明,想到了要去学本领,保护猴宝宝们。”

“这种保家卫国的思维值得提倡哦。”

“你们说石猴会不会在过海的时候耗尽洪荒之力。我听大人们说大海是非常危险的,有种大鱼可以轻易的撞翻大船,猴子只有竹筏,太危险了。”

“不危险,他有洪荒之力。”一个三岁的小丫头说道。

“会耗尽的。”一个男孩道。

“会耗尽的不叫洪荒之力。”小女孩固执的道。

“是力气就会耗尽,大海有十个洪荒之力。”小男孩道。

小女孩道:“大海没有洪荒之力。”

男孩怒道:“你怎么知道的!”

“唯有猴子才有洪荒之力,我就知道。”小女孩说道。

“信不信把你打哭,尽管和我狡辩?”男孩道……

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