第10章 不会是你朋友写的吧?
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林东不走寻常路,一天连续更新了三四万字,将剧情快速推进到了小庄被“狼牙”选中,引出狼牙特种大队后,当即便堵住了帖子里那些说楼主挂羊头卖狗肉,这是一本批着军事外皮的言情小说的网络键盘侠们!
而在此之前,大家讨论最多的角色。龙腾小说网ltxs520.com不是主角小庄,而是将自己一生都奉献给了部队的陈排和瞎了一只眼睛,将发掘兵王苗子视为己任的苗连!
“陈排,华夏陆军某集团军某机械化步兵师大功某团侦察连一排长,资深党员,排级转业,特等伤残军人,无立功记录,曾受过团级嘉奖一次。江苏南京人,出身普通工人家庭,18岁考入华夏某陆军学院侦察指挥专业本科,21岁到基层担任排长,历时两年。后因身体伤残转业回家,地方安置在一个残疾人企业担任什么我就不知道了。
这是文字上的记录。
眼睛能看见的呢?
由于病情发现过晚,几年之内他逐渐由下肢瘫痪转向腰部瘫痪,最后全身瘫痪只有两只手还可以正常活动。我最后得到他的消息是他还没有结婚,我想我的情书没有起什么作用。
顺便再说一下,他以前的绰号是“无影脚”,也就是说腾空以后在空中可以连踢四脚准确地踢碎4个酒坛子,然后以一个英武的姿势落地,然后首长们掌声不断感叹我们的侦察兵的神武。”
“仅仅这一段百十来字的述说,就可以看出,在部队时,他为了连队荣誉,哪怕身体已经废了,都未曾轻言放弃过退出狼牙的选拔。而在地方,他宁愿选择从此孤身一人,孤独终老,也不想让心爱的女人跟着自己遭罪……这种男人,才是真真正正的纯爷们!如果现实中真有这种一身傲骨有情有义的男人,哪怕他真的瘫痪了不能动了,老娘都愿意无条件嫁给他!”
“虽然陈排只是书中一个连名字都没有的龙套,但就是这样一个龙套,一个普通平凡到连名字都没有人,跟千千万万个默默无闻的官兵一样,他们日以继夜的守卫边疆,将自己的青春和一生都奉献给了部队。真正诠释了什么叫做青春无悔献军营!诠释了什么叫做世界上最可爱的人!”
“为了连队的荣誉,这个男人不惜将自己练废!哪怕每天晚上痛的直不起来腰来,他白天都照旧身先士卒,带领连队的兄弟们训练……看到这些,我真的很羞愧我曾经在部队混日子的经历。”
“看到陈排参加侦察兵大比,拿着枪托砸小庄,让他别管自己这个废人,赶紧追上去夺取那为数不多的名额时。说实话,我一个大老爷们既然都特么哭成了狗!”
“不得不说,楼主将小庄和小影的爱情和苗连、陈排的兄弟情都写的极为真实细腻,感人肺腑。不仅体现了军人对爱情的执着,更体现了军人的有情有义敢作敢为。就这一点,这个帖子我会一直保存在电脑上,直到它完结!”
“陈排,好样的!华夏军人,好样的!”
“相对于大家喜欢的陈排,其实我最欣赏的是因工负伤,伤了一只眼睛而永远无缘加入“狼牙”的苗连!因为就是他这种一心为国的精神,我们国家才能变得更为强大。”
“古人云:千里马常有,而伯乐却不常有!如果没有苗连这个伯乐,小庄这匹千里马哪怕再骨骼惊奇,都没什么卵用。所以,苗连这种伯乐才是社会上最无私可爱的那一类人!”
“看到苗连,我的脑海中便想起了一句诗词——留此残躯誓报国,枕戈他日厉国仇,毅魄有灵当杀贼!”
“不管是陈排,还是苗连,对于他们,身为退伍老兵的我,只有两个字想说——敬礼!”
一时之间,原本毁誉参半的留言,尽数变为了称赞和赞美。
同样的,《最后一颗子弹留给我》这个原创帖子,随着之后几天剧情的推进和作者的疯狂更新以及众人一致的好口碑,慕名而来拜读的人越来越多。
而其影响力和热度甚至于爱国者论坛的流量,也在短短一个星期的时间呈井喷式爆发,很是掀起了一股特种兵热。
而在两个星期后,当剧情快速推进到了狼牙特种大队,带领大家见识到了什么叫做真正的特种兵和领略了特种兵生涯,以及小庄跟小影的军旅恋歌时,《最后一颗子弹留给我》这个帖子既然一举超过了连载了两年,曾经出了好几期单行本,但因为销量不佳,而惨遭腰斩的《当兵十年》。
成为了军事类别真正的爆款!
连续两周的疯狂码字,林东都感觉自己变得有些魔怔了。
所以在周末集训队全体好不容易能够休息的这天,林东没有再像前面两周一样一起床就坐在电脑前,一直码字码到天黑,准备休息一天再说。
自从知道《最后一颗子弹留给我》已经在网络上小火了后,林东便没再关注帖子里众人的讨论。
因为不管他们讨论什么,林东都不会去改变小说中哪怕一个情节,或者给他们哪怕任何一个龙套角色。
上午,林东哪里都没去,好好的在班级睡了个懒觉!
这连续两周的疯狂码字,虽然看似简单,但实际在这两周时间,林东整个人都消瘦了几分,原本就有些惨白的脸庞,也变得更为白皙了起来。
而这一情况,顿时让吴狄这个班长开始怀疑林东是不是真的病了,不是在装病?
林东自然没有得病,他只是旧伤未愈,又连续两周透支了精气神罢了。
不过,面对吴狄的关心,林东心里还是有那么一丝温暖的。
下午时分。
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